Last weekend me and my mum went rollerskating.  When I was rollerskating I fell over and scraped my leg.  Boy it was sore.  It made a big mark and now it feels like sand stuck to my leg.  It does not feel sore anymore.

written and illustrated by RoyCla

4 Responses

  1. I liked the bit where you said that it felt like sand stuck to your leg. It helped to build a picture of how it felt.

    Allanah K

    Moturoa Class

    Appleby School


  2. I did that once only it was my sisters birthday and I fell off my scooter and made a bruise on my forehead. Everyone kept asking me what happened to my head all through the party it was so anoying!!!

  3. It must have been sore I know how you felt it happened to my cousin once and I was there but he fell of his skate-board and his tooth came out. 🙂

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